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TEXT 1
PADANG BULAN
Andrea Hirata is well-known writer a novel with title “Rainbow TROOPS”
In 2010 he has publish a novel with title “ Padang Bulan”.
Although in Rainbow Troops he narrates about his life when he was a child
Padang Bulan is a story about his love to A ling, although his father not blessing
The story about his love story but also about his friend,
Enong and M. Nur Enong is a poor orphan woman who must work
become a tin prospector for her family
She loves English lesson and have determined for study it
Until one day she meets ikal and M.Nur
when she want to study English in English course live in Tanjong Pandan.
However, ikal and M. nur want to supplying a job in Jakarta but ikal think about A Ling
He guess want to marriage with zinar
Finally, he choose work in his uncle’s coffee shop become a waiter.
M. Nur doesn’t go to Jakarta because miss his mother
and want help ikal grabbing A Ling from Zinar by chess match
The story so fool but it have a deep meaning
The story consist of meaning about love, friendship and life
Although ikal doesn’t have bless from his father about his love to A Ling
At least, he can get A Ling and his father love
Strong determined make us become a great people that is why I choose this novel to read
Although, Rainbow Troops is a well-known novel than Padang Bulan
I rather choose Padang Bulan than Rainbow Troops to read because the story is fun for read
TEXT 2
“Tanah Surga.. Katanya”
The Movie from direct Herein Novato and production By PT Demigisela Citra Cinema.
Many people Indonesia country on contine go abroad and work in Malaysia.
Some people Indonesia who work or even move and become citizen there.
Genre movie is drama satire director by Dedy Mizwar and Brajamusti.
Satire is means quibble of condition of the people
First story with arrival haris (Ence Bagus) from serawak Malaysia, he is single parent have 2 children
There are salman (osa Aji Santoso) and Salina (Tissa Biani Azzahra)
During time Haris work on serawak and he is rarely back home
Two children with her father is name hasymim (fuad Idris) and her often sick
Hasyim is excrucades dwikora compaign battle oppose Malaysia
Haris invite her father go abroad Malaysia because condition is not bad with health facility and easy search jobs
But hasym refuse because he reason Indonesia is heaven land and rich to
Haris only invite salina
Haris have wife
Malaysia people
The condition on contine very different with Malaysia,
For example electric available, street , and minimum education facility
On contine, the teacher one only she is Astuti (Astuti Nurdin) her teach double classes 3 and 4
And agus ringgo as dr anwar
He is doctor from city
And had assignment on contine Kalimantan with Malaysia.
From the movie we can see actor so well in appear character.
Shortage from the movie, no appear students from class 1,2,5 and 6
Director less exploration of natural beautiful and condition on village,
Also not creative , the plot not climax
Surplus the film from the theme is good and have nationalism soul
The movie also is satire form for central govement
TEXT 3
JOKOWI
Jokowi is Indonesian drama film in 2013
The film played by Justin Rifnu wikana and Prisia Nasution
The film was released the day, Thursday, June 21, 2013
to greet the birthday of DKI Jakarta Joko widodo 52nd day on Friday, June 21, 2013
in conjunction with the anniversary of Andhara Pradesh that all 486 days on Saturday, June 22, 2013
in the smaal village live carpenter’s son named joko widodo
who lived and live in small houses along the banks
Childhood are from affluent term has passed
But it did not give up the spirit to continue their education in higher education
Her love of rock music which persisted until the time he became a great leader of the future
As if his spirit a able to motivate.
Love story with iriana , a simple girl, school friends become the driving spirit of the younger future
leaders to meet the challenges.
After the death of MR Notomiharjo, parents, teacher and friend Joko such would not drown in sorrow
His attempt to prove all the lessons from his father , the louder he did.
And the time to deliver this child riverbank
A person who is not only great in the eyes of the people around him
But also humble and always humanize each other
From the edge of the river in a small village named srambatan
Joko has been able to appear into the city leaders write new pages of history
I think this film very greet because you can get motivation and inovation from this story
But the plot of the story is confusing
I recomanded you to watching the film
TEXT 4
5 CM
The movie in Indonesia done more advanced
The current of movies become a best seller
One of many movie is 5 cm
This movie realist on 2013 by soraya interfilm
The film director of 5 cm is rizal maniorani
Some players in this movie is fedinuril as genta , Herjunot Ali as zafron, ralin shah as riani
Pevita pearce as dinda, igor saykoji as ian and deni sumargo as arinal
The movie tells about friendship,love, dreams
They are friends until 10 years
Many moments they had together until one day, they not communication during 3 month
Because they want their dream
In 14 agustus they meet to carry out mountainering activity
They want uncase Indonesian flag on the mount
The finally they can get their dream and frienship until old
The movie take from real story wich writen in the novel by doni dirgantoro.
In this movie much mismatched with the novel
This film tells a bout mountainering activity but the scene in mount not much
The overal this film very interested with the location in mount.
Comments
skor grammar gua paling kecil waktu tes toefl kemaren
jadi ga bisa bantu
sorry ya
opo artine...
dia sudah melenggang kabur. adeknya udah ketemu, ikut seneng deh. untung aku gak dipenjara )
Hahahaha... Apa yahh sega ndog om artine.. -_-
je.eh
balik lagi tu dia